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Lost

We reached South Trinidad Island two days later and moored the boat four miles away from the land. Birdie agreed that I hadn't exaggerated its sinister appearance. Night fell and it got dark, plus there was this veil of mist preventing from reaching land. The white surf was covered with sea crabs. We could see jellyfish under the water because of the moonlight. It was so dramatic because I just couldn't believe I was lost in the middle of the sea.

We tried to use our hands to paddle towards the island. I tried to imagine that there was a fairy castle but eventually it turned out to be a mountain peak with volcanic rocks and coal black rock. The mountains were twisted into jagged shapes and there was a forest of dead trees surrounding the mountains. The dead trees were touched with silver by the moonlights reflection. Even thought there are a really beautiful rosy dawn and a sandy beach. But we were freaked out by the surrounding so we got back on the boat and head to a safer island besides this. So we went four miles away from the island and camped there for the rest of the week. This island was more beautiful, peaceful, and exciting than the last one…hopefully.

This was the original story. We reached South Trinidad Island two days later and moored the boat four miles from land Birdie agreed that i hadn't exaggerated the islands sinister appearance. Then night fell and moonlight transform edit into a fairy castle towers, turrets and battlements touched with silver. At half past five in the morning when we sailed closer, the reality of the island was more dramatic. The mountains of volcanic rock twisted into jagged shapes rose steeply from the white surf. though the day was clear, without a cloud, There was a veil of mist through which the mountain peak thrust upwards to meet the rosy dawn. A forest of dead trees covered the island interspersed with ferns. the few sandy beaches separated by cliffs of coal black rock were covered in wreckage and alive with sea crabs.