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Springtime on the menu This is a story about the happy reunion of Sarah, a menu typewriter, and Walter, a Young Farmer. The story took place on a day in March, in New York. Before the story happen, Sarah had a happy time with her boyfriend, Walter. When the story start, Sarah was typing a menu for a restaurant, saw that dandelions were included as a dish on the menu. It brought back the happy memories of her time with her time with Walter. She was deep in her sadness that Walter had left her, she let a tear drop on the menu. Finally, Walter found her because of the mark on the menu, and the phrase;” Dearest Walter” instead of "dandelions". We think the story is badly put and too complicated. It also is too short and not intelligible for young readers. If the author planned the story first and left out the stupid comment on his own work throughout the story, it would have been more easy to understand. Most inportantly, we think the story is really bad in quality. We couldn't have thought that this story was actually put into a book!