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We reached South Trinidad Island two days later and moored the boat four miles away from the land. Birdie agreed that I hadn’t exaggerated its sinister appearance. Our boat was four miles away the South Trinidad Island. There was veil of mist around the island. Also, there was a lot of white surf near the sandy beaches. The white surf was hitting our boat hardly and the boat was shaking. There were some coal black rocks and volcanic rocks that were twisted into jagged shapes. We heard a loud noise from the sandy beach that was make by a huge living thing --- an extremely big sea crab. It was the only thing that was alive on the island. At rosy dawn, the veil of mist disappeared. At the center of the island, a fairy castle was standing on a mountain peak. There was a forest of dead trees around the mountain. Night fell and it got darker and darker. The moonlight shined on the fairy castle and the fairy castle touched with silver. It was dramatic. Suddenly, the dramatic fairy castle collapsed and everything was sinking into the water. A heavy dust arose from the island. The island disappeared in a veil of dust.
 * __South Trinidad Island__**

**__The Original Story__** We reached South Trinidad Island two days later and moored the boat four miles from land. Birdie agreed that I hadn’t exaggerated the islands sinister appearance. Then night fell and moonlight transformed it into a fairy castle tower, turrets and battlements touched with silver. At half past five in the morning when we sailed closer, the reality of the island was more dramatic. The mountains of volcanic rock twisted into jagged shapes rose steeply from the white surf, though the day was clear without a cloud. There was a veil of mist through which the mountain peak thrust upwards to meet the rosy dawn. A forest of dead trees covered the island interspersed with ferns. The few sandy beaches separated by cliffs of coal black rock were covered in wreckage and alive with sea crabs.